Encyclopedia America
The goal of this was to acknowledge the flaws in American society and our ugly past, but not letting cynicism or despair keep us from trying to better a country that has so much potential to do good.
Encyclopedia America
Trigger Warning: poem contains references to gun violence and slavery
I. Pledge of Allegiance
One huddled mass,
facing exclusion acts,
yearning to breathe free
but choking on hypocrisy.
One education,
under lockdowns,
and traumas passed on
like hand-me-downs.
One nation, in desperation
inexplicably,
with deliberate injustice
for just us.
I pledge allegiance to thee,
of what we can become,
of age-old stitches in our flag
yet to be undone.
II. The National Anthem
While bombs burst in the air,
Pockets explode with corporate shares,
Gave proof through centuries
That our blood-streaked flag
Is still here.
O say does that scar-spangled
banner yet wave
O’er the Land of the GDP,
and the Home of the graves.
III. American Republic
Of the people (16th century, white, slave-owning, plantation-owning, rich, elitist, powerful), for the people (16th century, white, slave-owning, plantation-owning, rich, elitist, powerful), by the people (16th century, white, slave-owning, plantation-owning, rich, educated, influencial, powerful).
IV. Founders
We hold these truths to be self-evident,
that all men
are created equal.
What about
remember the Ladies?
And while the founders debated,
the founding mothers’ ideals were cremated.
46 male presidencies later,
We found out
that all men would
be tyrants
if they could.
For this poem, I used the format of influential American documents and literature (the Pledge of Allegiance, the Star-Spangled Banner, a phrase from the Gettysburg Address, and “Remember the Ladies,” a letter from Abigail Adams to John Adams) and tried to convey how I feel the legacies of those documents look like in the present-day. The founding of the U.S. has been on my mind a lot, largely because of the U.S. History classes I’m taking at school. I think the most important takeaway from my poem is the last stanza of I. Pledge of Allegiance: “I pledge allegiance to thee / of what we can become / of age-old stitches in our flag / yet to be undone,” because the goal of this was to acknowledge the flaws in American society and our ugly past, but not letting cynicism or despair keep us from trying to better a country that has so much potential to do good.
Editors: Sam L., Anoushka K. Chris F.